NR 537 Week 7 Performance Evaluation

NR 537 Week 7 Performance Evaluation

NR 537 Week 7 Performance Evaluation

Successful Learner’s Summative Evaluation
Practice setting:  Academic
The successful students will write a paper on community health development action plan by integrating the concepts of community assessment tool, identifying major public health concerns, culture-based care, patient-centered care, and nurse-patient relationship. The paper should be between 6 to 8 pages excluding title, abstract, and reference page. Use at least 5 scholarly articles published in last five years. Format should be according to APA 6th edition. Total points: 60
CompetenciesEvaluation ScoreSatisfactory (20)Improvement Needed (15)Unsatisfactory (10)Educator’s Summative Assessment
Competency: Quality of Care Demonstrated behaviors related to:KnowledgeSkillAttitude


Satisfactory (20)
Good job. The paper was highly informative with good analysis as statistics related to diabetes, Influenza, and heart failure were included. You identified the community, major health problems, and barriers in achieving the better health. The action plan is detailed and measurable and supported with adequate evidence from the research articles published in last five years. The critical analysis of 5-year health improvement was was carried out well. The arguments had a persuasive tone. Overall, good job.
Competency: Professional BehaviorDemonstrated behaviors related to:KnowledgeSkillAttitude


Satisfactory (20)
The paper included detailed analysis of ethical and professional aspects in the community-based and patient-based care and examples included provided highlighted the public health issues very well. The example of Chinese immigrants using herbal medicine highlighted the importance of culture. The concept of cultural humility was applied effectively to explain the need for culture-based care. You did a good job by stressing on need for better patient-nurse relationship. 
Competency: Evidence-based PracticeDemonstrated behaviors related to:KnowledgeSkillAttitude


Improvement (15) Needed
The action plan included did address the public health concerns, but did not address how the problem of misconceptions and attitude towards health care among few communities. You identified the problem of use of herbal medicine, but did not explain how it affected health development. The paper is written well with professionalism and great care was taken to analyze community health problems, but it is better to address all the major health care concerns in the action plan. 
Concluding statement by educator: Overall, good job. The paper is detailed, well organized and presented with subheadings, adequate evidence provided, but need to address problem of misconception and attitude of communities towards health care. 
Unsuccessful Learner’s Summative Evaluation
Practice setting:  Academic
The unsuccessful students do not fully identify and analyze the community, its demographics, and major health concerns. Does not integrate all the concepts of community assessment tool, culture-based care, patient-centered care, and nurse-patient relationship and analyze only few concepts. Does not develop a good action plan. Does not communicate analyses clearly. Does not include adequate resources and problems in APA formatting. 
CompetenciesEvaluation ScoreSatisfactory (20)Improvement Needed (15)Unsatisfactory (10)Educator’s Summative Assessment
Competency: Quality of Care Demonstrated behaviors related to:KnowledgeSkillAttitude
Unsatisfactory (10)
The concepts were not analyzed or applied while developing arguments. For example, you did not include the concept of cultural humility in your paper. You did not analyze why it is important to consider influenza vaccination for school children as it was a major health problem. The arguments lacked depth and you did support your claims by integrating evidence. 
Competency: Professional BehaviorDemonstrated behaviors related to:KnowledgeSkillAttitude

Improvement Needed (15)
The concepts of nurse-patient relationship and culture-based care were explained. However, providing example on how you would achieve them would have been better. The writing style was clear in patient-centered care and the subheadings of holistic care, communication, patient empowerment, and shared decision-making were included, but analyses lacked depth. The word choice and sentence structure can be better as there as fluff words. 
Competency: Evidence-based PracticeDemonstrated behaviors related to:KnowledgeSkillAttitude

Unsatisfactory (10)
Great effort on stating  evidence based examples, however, the paper showed a inefficient of understanding on community assessment tool as you did not consider population and life quality of the community into consideration. The action plan lacked   structure as you did not clearly mention which action plan lead to what outcome. The tone was informal in this section and structure was oblique. 
Concluding statement by educator: Overall, the paper lacks depth in analyses, did not integrate all mentioned concepts, the writing on the most part lacked structure, and very few resources were used. One good aspect is you explained nurse-patient relationship and culture-based care concepts with good structure for concept of patient-centered care. It is crucial to study, analyze, and integrate all the concepts with good examples to improve your paper. 

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